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fucking grammar

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@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
As long as Pit is
That much I'm sure of
I'm not about the rest:
Who am I? And why did I fell? fall?
For now, I seem to be somewhat dead;
But still, I can watch and I can see
And so I shall; Shall see what will they make of this.
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@

p(. I was sent here
To investigate
The disappearance of the first; First;
Strange case it is;
I'm a stranger here, and no idea where to start;
I'm pretty sure this has something to do with pit over here.
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
*Second*:

p(. Greetings, the Third; I appreciate the help;
Especially from the a man who knows this place;
I certainly could use your help;
For now, do you happen to have a flashlight?

@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@

p(. No flashlight; I don't need it
I see in dark, as good as bats do;
And you don't need it, for the The Pit
Is black as hell, and no lantern will help you.

*Second*:
@@ -80,8 +80,8 @@
Don't touch that woundrous pit
It's phenomenon, don't you see
A man can fall right in and fly
And fly fall and fly, fall, and no one can tell
When does he fall. hit the ground.

*Third*:



@@ -118,16 +118,16 @@
p(. My drama sensor tells me that
I must be here
And so I came, now feed me
With the
The bits and bytes of tragedy.

*Third*:

p(. This one is cyborg; has implants
Implanted over all over his body;
He can't be killer, for his brain enhancer
Forces him to cooperate with law
(To Fifth) A man was killed here
Thrown into pit, and law is onto its his killer
Have your fine eyething
Eyed something in the gloom of night?

@@ -188,7 +188,7 @@
*Third*:

p(. This one may be the killer too.
He's crazy; You can expect everything anything from him.

h2. The Eighth

@@ -223,7 +223,7 @@
If only... I had very weird vision
When I woke up, and was in haze
I saw a man, falling down
And he was never going to fall. hit the ground.

*Second*:

By Voker57 on 2013-11-18 18:24:12 +0000